Teacher feedback - Liked the layout of my font cover.
Didn't like the fact that the stories weren't in capitals, apostrophies arn't correct, barcode is too big and fill the space on the left.
Target Audience Feedback - Liked the fact that it looks "professional". Didn't like the barcode as it seems to stretched, Didn't like the guitars on the front cover. Need to make sure the word Gibson isn't on two lines as well.
Teachers feedback - Only coment left was "decent" for how they like it.
To improve I need to organize stories more neatly. Change the font size, style or colour for this page.Make the photo of Bill smaller.
Target Audience feedback- Dont think anyone liked my contents page. Alter the Jimi Hendrix title so that the number 30 is on another line.Alter the colour scheme and change font size.
Teacher feedback - "Good!"
Need to change the 'My Tunes' section to maybe make it fit better. Get rid of the background colour for the text and change the background picture to be gold again.
Target Audience feedback- "drop captial is amazing" "page numbers are good" "love the shadowing image for dps background". Try Black or Gold for the background image. Change page number style and colour scheme.
Feedback on rough cut
To improve I need to organize stories more neatly. Change the font size, style or colour for this page.Make the photo of Bill smaller.
Target Audience feedback- Dont think anyone liked my contents page. Alter the Jimi Hendrix title so that the number 30 is on another line.Alter the colour scheme and change font size.
Need to change the 'My Tunes' section to maybe make it fit better. Get rid of the background colour for the text and change the background picture to be gold again.
Target Audience feedback- "drop captial is amazing" "page numbers are good" "love the shadowing image for dps background". Try Black or Gold for the background image. Change page number style and colour scheme.
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